Who Let Them In? Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Who Let Them In?

Rating: 5.0


There is a knock on the door,
I can see the latch open,
But it was not me
Who let them in,
It was not me
Who let them in.

I hear the water running,
I can see the taps open,
But it was not me
Who turned them on,
It was not me
Who turned them on.

The candles burning bright,
The melancholy mournful sighs,
The mascara on my lashes,
It was they who let them in.

I look into the mirror,
I am wearing a disguise,
But it was not me
Who put it on,
But it was not me
Who put it on.

I feel my cheeks wet,
I see tears running down,
But it was not me
Who was crying.
But it was not me
Who was crying.

The owls hoot in the night,
Shadows dance in delight,
My blood chills in my veins,
It was they who let them in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 October 2008

wonderful! keep writing!

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 21 October 2008

real eerie....luvd it...the usage of words r excusite..

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my shadow mourn for my body RJHHTKHG

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 October 2008

nice one, , i got scared reshma, , , , a 10 surely

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C. P. Sharma 22 October 2008

I liked this soliloquy. Very few of us have the time for such dialogues with ourselves. Lord Krishana also says so in Gita: The Bhagvad Gita says: (This being is neither pierced by the weapons, nor burnt by the fire, nor made damp by the water, nor dried up by the wind.)

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C. P. Sharma 04 November 2008

A great metaphysical poem that will for ever live in poetic history.

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Roger Cornish 04 November 2008

I like the menace in this......and the repetition.... One to many 'who's' in the first stanza? Rx

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Alison Cassidy 01 November 2008

Mystery and a hint of menace weave in and out of this fascinating poem about self and other and choice and control. The poem works beautifully with its sing-song repetition and its lyrical phrasing. Fine work, Reshma. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Kee Thampi 29 October 2008

we wish to sing... The candles burning bright, The melancholy mournful sighs, The mascara on my lashes, It was they who let them in.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 26 October 2008

a deep mesmerising poem

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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