Whole Again Poem by Seen Green

Whole Again

Rating: 5.0


Waiting For The Day That I am Whole Again, Thinking Of My Mistakes And Gasping For Air...
And Why Was I Here Again?
What Was My Duty?
What Was My Lesson In Life?
Thoughts Are Running Through My Head, Spiraling And Falling Down On A Soft Surface Of Innocent Emotions.
There Waiting For A Shooting Star That Takes Me To A World Of Love And Joy Where The Child In Me Can Heal And Blossom Into A Rose Strong And Beautiful, So The Pain And Confusion Disappears...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Vipins Puthooran 22 October 2011

I like this poem very much, a beautiful one.. Sometimes that innocent emotions of our heart will take us to a land of love where the flowers of life will blossom again in glee and dance in our silent breath.

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