Why Poem by simon McCloud

Why

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Forgive me lord for I have sinned,
but my thoughts it seems are like dust in the wind.
They blow in the breeze till they fall to the ground,
and with the greatest of ease they come back around.
They taunt and tease, and criticise,
it's getting harder to tell their truth from lies
I blame you not for the people you make,
but could your greatest creation, be your biggest mistake?

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Brianne Lindline 01 October 2008

I like this poem a lot. You did a good job.

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