Why? ! Poem by Dana Amer

Why? !

Rating: 5.0


Day by day
Time goes by,
& i am searching for a way
To tell you 'why'.

Why you turned your back & walked away
In the time i needed a friend? !
Where all the things you used to say
Where is 'I will be with you to the end'? !

I don't know what happened to you
You have left me in a great pain,
Now no matter what you are going to do
We are never going to be friends again! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2010

that's the funny way love plays its own game often...very poignant...last line shows much resolve honest frank lines well versed...10

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Afzal Shauq 03 July 2009

Why you turned your back & walked away In the time i needed a freind? ! Where all the things you used to say Where is 'I will be with you to the end'? ! I agree with your say.. yes some friends who are not fair and only self interst based turn their back at the time when you need them... and its also fact there are some, who keep their soul intouched with friends for ever and ever.. it depends on the faith of friendship..when friendship is fair and clear and with out any self intersts... thats enteranl type... and my this haiko type.... 'We know each other since life on earth like kindred spirits' this poem of yours is really a big reality and no oe can denny from it... but we poets and artist have to join hands for ideal humanity to ensure... we have to behave like we are true cousins of each others... being the children od Adam's family... hope dana you never stop feeding love based peaceful humanty in your poems and will write more and more... all my friendly respects for you and your sweet and very long comments...10+++++++++++++++++

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