What do you think this poem is about?

why betrayal?

Sitting on the window
Gazzing into the night
How did my life get so bad?
I dont know what i might do
my hearts been brokened
im so confused
people i thought i could trust
people i thought were my friends
people that now know lied to me
i cry inside at night
mixed thoughts run through my mind
who are my friends?
i get told different stories
mine seem fake
it hurts me inside to know that my friends aren't real
just users
fights, lies, betrayal how much more can i take
it confuses me when people do that
it betrays the whole meaning of the word
'friendship'
they call me up
act like my mates
but whats going on?
thats my final question
im fourteen i cant loose my friends
some are real
some are fake
i know the real ones
but what are the fake ones gaining out of this


i wrote this during class: (

Submitted: Tuesday, October 28, 2008


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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (10/28/2008 1:20:00 AM)

    Just good and bad in life, you have to seek the good friends, the rest aren't friends

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