Why Do I Write Such Silly Stuff? Poem by francis e.rudy

Why Do I Write Such Silly Stuff?

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the wind blows my window
i'ts near time to go

across the cold alley way
the dried leaves blow

outside every one's looking at me
but, their eyes look down; afraid to talk

is it them or me, my sanity or vanity
that makes them balk!

it's a San Francisco wind
blowing in

blowing the leaves around
i wanted to travel

but i'm locked in Chicago
with the Alburquerque blues

with all i have to lose
with the whole world from to choose

i'm back in my room, alone
with the any where i'm at, i'm still the same blues!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 04 July 2008

You know, this is really good prose. I can't call it poetry because I think that would diminish what I see as a style of writing that is excellant. You have got to be a professional writer of some kind. A newspaper would be lucky to have a guy like you. GW62

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Sonny Rainshine 09 May 2008

Would make a nice song. We can pick up and move to a glamorous place, but them ole blues just tag right along. Nice work.

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francis e.rudy

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chicago, il. u.s.a
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