I love you because you're the other half
that makes me whole,
when we're apart
I feel helpless and out of control,
when we're together united as one,
you make me feel I can reach out
and wrap my arms around the sun,
when I'm with you
I don't feel any sense of pressure,
I'm completely secure
and I feel very, very special,
and if that isn't enough
to answer why I love you so,
I can easily write another page
but I would hate to ruin the flow.
a good write on love feelings. your the other half that makes me whole excellent
this one has always been one of my favorite poems... thanks for sharing., ... keep on writing!
A nice romantic poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.
A well articulated love poem nicely penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.
the half I'm always indeed everywhere I've come here to fulfill myself cause I know the another half is you o love/// beautiful loving expression
cancerians make lovely lovers most cancerians are like lovely women warm hearted apart from that.....
A nice love poem. The flow is fluent and natural. Congratulations, Bernard, on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! Well done!
Love is such a wonderful feeling that makes all the difference in a relationship. Thanks, Bernard. when we're apart / I feel helpless and out of control, when I'm with you / I'm completely secure / and I feel very, very special,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'when I'm with you I don't feel any sense of pressure, I'm completely secure' RAB