Bernard Snyder

Bronze Star - 2,036 Points (11-07-1959 / Savannah Ga.)

'Why I Love You' - Poem by Bernard Snyder

I love you because you're the other half
that makes me whole,
when we're apart
I feel helpless and out of control,
when we're together united as one,
you make me feel I can reach out
and wrap my arms around the sun,
when I'm with you
I don't feel any sense of pressure,
I'm completely secure
and I feel very, very special,
and if that isn't enough
to answer why I love you so,
I can easily write another page
but I would hate to ruin the flow.


Comments about 'Why I Love You' by Bernard Snyder

  • Gold Star - 27,267 Points Chinedu Dike (12/26/2014 3:10:00 AM)

    A well articulated love poem nicely penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 27,267 Points Chinedu Dike (12/26/2014 3:05:00 AM)

    A nice romantic poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Double Deuce22 (11/27/2014 6:03:00 AM)

    this one has always been one of my favorite poems... thanks for sharing., ... keep on writing! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,874 Points Heather Wilkins (9/10/2014 10:04:00 PM)

    a good write on love feelings. your the other half that makes me whole excellent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (10/27/2011 1:58:00 PM)

    'when I'm with you
    I don't feel any sense of pressure,
    I'm completely secure'

    RAB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Abhimanyu Kumar.s (9/29/2011 9:00:00 AM)

    i love your expressions really it gets in. superb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/7/2011 10:04:00 PM)

    Fabulous! A heart touching love confession that clearly shows your great passion and feelings! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 31, 2011



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