Once I was sitting under the tree.The sun sit in a muddy spring.
The flowers were crying beside me. And a bird wounded his wing.
I raised my sight, awh what I see... A storm and great thundering.
I worried, what will happen to me. I was lost in a mysterious ring.
All my grief got into my mind. I felt the importance of life.
And I felt that I became blind.I've cut pain through a knife.
I thought to walk against the wind, and put an end for that strife.
I remembered God, and guess what I found, I've found my life.
I said why am I sad? Why I care about that grief, while others are happy.
all what I need is belief, that there is God in the sky who makes them happy.
When you are at the end of you're wits. When you think it'll never get any better just look up. Another Great Poem.
Your faith and your poems are beautiful. Keep writing every day as time permits. Good work! Constance Yost
wow! this is so great buddy! ! i like your rhyming especially the three breaking in the last stanza, congrats and keep it up dear poet! !
This poem can help so many remember God is always there for them. And for that, humanity can never thank you enough. :)
I totally agree I too have God so there's no need to cry for long He has away of wiping the tears from are eyes.Thank you Father God! ! ! Thank you for reminding us all that there is a God who cares....
hey, thanks so much for inviting me to read your poems. Great Poem, Ditto to everybody's comment. I really liked the line 'I remember God, And guess what I found, I've found my life.' Simply put, A solution to all problems, and yet so hard for many to figure it out.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Of course I thanking Him everyday no every time no every moment for his many blessings on me :)