After A Great Thunder There Is A Beautiful Rainbow Poem by Abdallah Gamal

After A Great Thunder There Is A Beautiful Rainbow

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</>Once I was sitting alone, , wondering the beauty of nature
It was raining, and the thunder was breaking up the mountains
I was frightened, , i lost my mind, I scared of my coming future
I lost the way to my home.. I ran away under the rains
Wondering how can I get out from that terrible twister
hide under the trees? ! , but the lightning won't leave anything to remain
or search for a shelter, , but i don't trust the intentions of the humans
after a while the sun appeared among the rainbow and glowing clouds
and the flowers grew on and covered the broken mountain
I wondered and asked myselfy where is the rain
The answer came...You have to believe and trust me
Your fate always roads you to the right way, the way to me
But your wrong decisions are that road you to the hell..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ross Holt 10 July 2011

good poem loved the title! please read mine: D thanks

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Aqeb Benazir 11 July 2011

A great story you conveyed through your poem! ! this probably wins the trophy among other poems which you wrote! keep it up!

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Katelin Offord Harper 25 July 2011

another great poem and i think u should never stop writing

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Ingibo Benson 28 July 2011

Truth and experience in beautiful language.

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Patricia Grantham 09 November 2013

You are very attentive to nature and its many dangers and wonders. However faith plays a very important part in the way you live and survive. The weather seemed ominous in your eyes but your fate was in Gods hand. Another great write. Well done.

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Kanav Justa 11 December 2012

that shows positive attitude, , , , nice write, , ,

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Jessie Hopkins 05 February 2012

Amen! That's all I can say. Along with keep it up! :)

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Liliana Roman 08 November 2011

it has a nice flow and rythm.

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Murphy Payne 29 July 2011

This is a great poem. The imagetry is very good. Wish I had written it.

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