I held her hands, on bended knees
Eyes gone red, tears rolling down my cheeks
I kissed her lips, so cold and dry
Her touch in mine triggered me to cry
She screamed in pain while uttering my name
It crushed my heart I couldn’t do a thing
I whispered softly, so wounded and broken
God why? God why? You allowed this to happen?
I embraced her so tight, her voice slowly fading
Her eyes closed, and barely breathing
An excruciating pain ate the sanity in me
For as she took her last breath, I’m not who I used to be
I covered her face, my hands shivering
My love is dead, my life, my everything
She’s gone forever leaving me all alone
I don’t know how to live my life, a life on my own.
MERCHANT TANKER STENHEIM
Margate Road Anchorage Area, UK
This is so beautiful and emotional. The grief of the subject is so vividly displayed in the poem! I love it! Definately a tear-jerker! Very deep poem. Great job! Paige
Nicely expressed to a vivid memory of futility and despair that embraces the coming to terms with loss. The poem has a tremendous feel of shock and grief to it that is richly displayed by depth of emotion.
this si perfect sir.. you are good. um, i loved your rhymes and choice of words..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a very touching write with a fine-flowing words.. sad, , , convincing words... heart-breaking piece 10+++