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Wild Animals

When you look at wild animals
they are breathtaking,
so pure and natural.

If the animal looks you in the eyes
you can feel connected.

If the animal walks up to you
takes food from your hand,
you can feel trust.

When the animal keeps returning
for food,
you can feel needed.

By mistake
you take the animal home,
you can feel complete.

Time goes on
you look into the animals eyes,
you can feel sadness.

Knowing that
you have to return the animal to the wild,
you can feel loss.

When you let the animal go,
it runs!

Submitted: Tuesday, February 09, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, February 09, 2010


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  • K. Bianca (2/27/2010 12:28:00 AM)

    Fantasic work! Your poem kept me guessing from the start what you want to convey... the suspense is beautifully built. I love the message. It's so true.

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  • Dulakshi Wakista (2/22/2010 1:40:00 AM)

    What a beautiful scene you've portrayed.well expressed.I really enjoyed.Wild animals are so beautiful and so precious.We must save and protect them.This poem is good for the wild animals lovers.
    Thanks for sharing.

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