Winter Season ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Winter Season ~

Rating: 5.0


When the winter is on ~
And grass dances to the tunes of dews,
then the wind carries the lusty scent,
And sunrays becomes gentle
under the thick and rich clouds,
And ocean plays a symphony
then radiant spring blooms,
Indeed, it is a gift from God.

Yellow faces of daffodils delights
when they sing and dance
with the occasional rain,
resounding pit, pat, pit, pat ~
It recreates the memory and desire
of mellower season.

No gem or gold can give this pleasure,
No melody is better than the harvest song.
When ice is in making ~
this world looks good enough to bite
and when it melts in the mouth
we get a true taste of the winter season.

Friday, November 19, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: winter,season,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta S 19 November 2021

Wow so well thought poem. I admire the imagery you created with this poem.

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Gordon Walter 19 November 2021

Seasonal best poem.

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Juhaina Tumlu 20 November 2021

Winter melting in mouth. Fabulous

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 20 November 2021

Very very true: No gem or gold can give this pleasure, No melody is better than the harvest song.

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Maria Mitea 21 November 2021

Brilliant work! refined and fluid like a river!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2021

Resounding pit, pat, pit, pat......felt the delicate sound!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 November 2021

This world looks good enough to bite and when it melts in the mouth we get a true taste of the winter season. Scintillating poem on the last season of the year Full 5 Stars score

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2021

A magnificent poem well crafted. Each and every stanza stands out Amazing closure lines.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2021

Every season has its own beauty and wonder. Winter gives us time to hibernate to gain strength.

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