Wishes Poem by akram awadat

Wishes

Rating: 4.5


If I can have sweet wishes
I wish to see you everyday
to look at your expressions and hear your voice
to see a wide smile at your face.

to put my hand in your hand
to sit on the shore and watch the sunrise
to feel your heartbeat and whisper I love you
as i say 'i am yours and you are mine'..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karla Bardanza 11 October 2009

This is a lovely poem sweet Akram! 10+ Karla B.

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A lovely poem AKram with romantic images..well said..will visit again to vote as iam writing from mobile..

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Lalitha iyer 12 October 2009

If I can have sweet wishes I wish you could be somewhere far off enjoying life and laugh heartily and have a healthy glow...............nice wish Akram

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Prakash Mehra 12 October 2009

Nice piece of art. wonderful poem.

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Connie Tallada 12 October 2009

how could you be so mean inviting me to read your poem! it made me cry..geeeeeeeeeeeez... your wish is my wish.. but thats pretty impossible.. you see he is a soldier... (greatly penned, keep up the good work!)

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the Qween 25 May 2010

IT'S AN LOVELY POEM DEEP AND TOUCHING, BUT THERE IS SADENESS IN YOUR POEM LIKE YOU WONT TO DO SOMETHING BUT YOU CAN'T. BUT OTHER WAY IT'S LOVELY

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Sallie Howson 11 February 2010

simply beautiful :) .........

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Sandra Dodd 29 January 2010

Ah and a happy lady she must be! So sweetly done. Congratulations.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 23 December 2009

Love is the essence of life. Here u expressed well

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Akram Saqib 22 October 2009

ALAS! WISHES DO NO COME TRUE

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