Wishful Snoring Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Wishful Snoring

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O beautiful and lovely village
You are liked and adored in all ages
As child you gave us all happiness
In youth, the beautiful life ground to face

How can we forget those tall trees?
With thick bushes to hide and feel free
The joy in roaming like birds
Sky so wide and fields so open

In each night I remember
All my school mate and family members
Those plays in street
And cheerful smile with delight

That small river with open bed
Sands full and thorns thinly spread
No worry for its sweet pinch
We used to enjoy village by every inch

Those small huts
Not well built
But of mud
Hardly could we imagine

High rise buildings appeal me less
City life is always to chase
The material life is now boring
Nights are spent in wishful snoring

Wednesday, April 2, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

O beautiful and lovely village You are liked and adored in all ages

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Snoring in another sense Robert Alicias3 minutes ago I like the comparison of night (day) life noises etc like actual snoring of greedy and not so greedy men. They make noise in small and big things.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Nostalgia Aliaa Bostan10 minutes ago Nice incursion into the old memories and the surprising effect of modernity. Nice work! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

Let me come up with a comment from my heart. This is a poem that wonderfully takes us forward by going back in time. I love the title of the poem. Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Apr 04,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

Hasmukh ji, yet another beautiful view of the peaceful and charming rural India. Nostalgic recollection of the years spent in such ambience in boyhood tugs at our hearts. Regards. GSP Rao, Hyderabad Apr 04,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

delightful Warner Baxter9 minutes ago very nicely written Comment +1 .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2014

Nostalgia Aliaa Bostan10 minutes ago Nice incursion into the old memories and the surprising effect of modernity. Nice work! Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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