With A Great Feeling Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With A Great Feeling

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With a great feeling
Friday,19th July 2019

Whenever I did something wrong
my heart did not echo well and sang a song
it reflected inside with a great feeling
and it was almost killing

who was inside?
sitting remotely to decide!
and divide my opinion
regarding human relation

I felt little hesitation
and always raised the question
how is that so good to respond?
and honestly correspond with the soul

the heart clicked and echoed
and allowed me
to probe deep
and keep self well informed

i realized that there is something
that guides me to bring
some kind of peace for not doing bad
I always leaned and said to self

here lays the lies
and that rallies
behind your conscious
you respond not and remain pious

Hasmukh Mehta
Courtesy: Irish Soul

With A Great Feeling
Thursday, July 18, 2019
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Mahtab Bangalee 18 July 2019

i realized that there is something that guides me to bring some kind of peace for not doing bad I always leaned and said to self.../// superb realizing the inside

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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