With Common Man Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Common Man

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Leave at once
The place
Where you are
Insulted often here

Stay for ever
Where you get honor
With peace in mind
And if people are kind

Life and death
May remain till last breath
But to die often
Is not appreciated even

Take decision
Have no confusion
Life must be lived as an ordinary man
Even if that is lived in hardship with common man

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First stanza was great, but... Madison Bartholow9 minutes ago It's hard to follow. I think the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. but the second to last stanza didn't really rhyme while the rest did and otherwise didn't really seem to fit with the rest. I like it though, it's charming.

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good Shakil Ahmed BaliyaviLess than a minute ago good Comment +1 good

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Sajad WaniLess than a minute ago ok

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Leave at once The place Where you are Insulted often here

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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