hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 29,744 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Forces Liaison

I took sand particles
Kissed with tears and smile
Just rubbed over forehead
Took message to heart and read

Even though not considered as prestigious
Love for motherland by everybody was famous
Everybody may look at you with respect
This is how people love a person and react

It was first visit to homeland
Even though I wanted to meet school friends
They were my long time associate
We used to share many things and relate

They thought I might have become little fat
With all tough muscles and face straight
But I was even lean and thin
It was their views and thinking

It was tough time at training center
Gave some odd feeling when entered
Slowly it gave sense of patriotism
As many things were taught under mannerism

Total brains wash with physical exhaustion
No permission to leave camp without permission
Strict discipline with overall improvement
No place for outside contact with attachment

This is all about a person
Who joined forces with many reasons?
I was influenced by the soldier’s stories
How were they undergoing tough life for country?

It is one of the proudest moments
That one prefers for honorable job and sent
It is great opportunity and occasion
Where you feel great with forces liaison

Submitted: Monday, July 15, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (With Forces Liaison by hasmukh amathalal )

Read all 4 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  3. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  6. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  7. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  8. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  9. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  10. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
[Hata Bildir]