“If you are here, where is divinity”?
One of well known poetess asked in continuity
“The moment you feel part of nobility” I added
“Seriously feel touch of serenity with flavor” and concluded:
Sometimes we are over zealous
It not that we want to become famous
There is an internal urge
For soul to act and purge
It comes with noble act
When you feel with each part
Insects, animals and human alike
You love all and like
This makes you happy
As kindness is with you already
Only you want to near holy sprit
Admire it within and greet
You are viewing it with importance
As you are not living with distance
You are aligned fully with internal light
You wish no more to struggle and fight
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Infinite Love much appreciated...The way its articulated is wonderful. I think I would be looking my life in a different way loving myself.... Unlike · Reply · 1 · 10 hours ago
Re: With importance (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Monday, October 07,2013 (22: 43: 05) You know Jadia, this would have sounded great in Sanskrit. There are glimmers of something very poetic here, which I can appreciate. The rhyming did not feel forced and the Brahmin (arrogance) sounded more like translated from Bengali but captured something of the vedic consciousness just the same. I felt the power of renunciation and surrender to shakti throughout.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“If you are here, where is divinity”? One of well known poetess asked in continuity