With Love's Offer Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Love's Offer

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With love's offer

Each flower blossoms
When opens petals
You will find
Beautiful scene of its kind

Yet it was decoration
In beautiful relation
Its place and position
Let there be no confusion

Each heart beats
And greets
Each soul
With same call

What do we exchange!
And change
Out attitude or angle!
I think both as good people

Let it get involved
And problem be easily solved
In lovely manner
With love's offer

With Love's Offer
Wednesday, January 7, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Panmelys Panmelys 07 January 2015

A very nice poem but somehow the language seems a little awkward: so daring to eat a peach I suggest: When petals open you will find a need to get involved where problems may be managed in a lovely manner with love's offering. But this doesn't imply you need stop creating, or even heed my comment, for the poem has a touching message, and love has its own language. Panmelys happy new year.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 January 2015

When opens petals You will find Let it get involved And problem be easily solved In lovely manner With love's offer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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