What really ails new poets?
Is it contentment or quietness?
I think it is largely both
That prevents them to be truthful to oath
One tragedy is their aloofness
To remain silent over comments received on face
Non reciprocal gesture
And above all no comments for others
I shall give logical conclusion
As there has to be no confusion
With projection of views
And contact with few
It is more important to view others work
As it gives insight to the meaning of words
The style of address and attempt to convey
This all matters with poet's way
The poet should be made known
With credible work or own
He or she may be new with presentation
But works speaks clearly with view's citation
What really ails new poets? Is it contentment or quietness? I think it is largely both
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you Hasmukhji! Thank you for always leaving behind your imprint, tick marking all that you go through. Yes, we are in ill times! We as a race have stopped responding. Silence overpowers. but again, in silence too we show solidarity and not always ignore. I am sure you have the best of times posting your comments & leaving your lines for scrutiny or for sheer pleasure of sharing your expressions! You stay happy thus and perhaps the happiest! Accept my warm Regards! Purabi, Gandhinagar Jan 13,2015