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The start was slow and unpredictable,
You attracted me with your nature and handsome face,
So soft, like my own secret loft,
High emotions, tenderness, openness,
But your soul carries a heavy load,
Like a farm gate, that needs to be tightly closed,
You make me feel like a precious stone, luscious, flaming red,
With your supreme love in bed,
So macho, you always led,
Many facets of your character emerged with surprise,
Hand in hand through this tranquil land,
Fields wet dripping with past toil,
Mountains glazed with cotton wool mist,
You have me at the top of your wishing list,
Embracing with pasts,
Filled with sorrow and pain,
In a leafy lane,
The breeze softly caressing our fragile hearts,
Within our lair,
Your care,
Is without compare.

Submitted: Friday, March 22, 2013

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  • Jennie Sparrow (4/20/2013 5:03:00 PM)

    Loved this, perfect choice of words to describe the relationship between two people.

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  • Maya Hanson (4/7/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    So romantic- you have me at the top of your wishing list
    I wish I could write like this! ! ! Great job
    ~mye3 poet

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  • Karen Degnan-foiles (3/30/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    Loved it! You really kept my attention... and what a beautiful story too.
    ~Karen

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  • Valerie Dohren (3/28/2013 2:30:00 PM)

    Romantic and heartfelt - another lovely poem Hazel.

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  • Thomas A Robinson (3/26/2013 9:40:00 PM)

    I agree with Lyda... care is to love as rays are to the sun.
    the sun may be 93 million miles away but the rays are felt here.
    Some that loves you may be six thousand miles away but the care can be felt
    anyway. Love your piem Hazel.

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  • Sayeed Abubakar (3/24/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    A very good poem. I like it.

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  • Lu Conner (3/23/2013 11:43:00 AM)

    Another great write showing lofty signs of love and affection :) 10+

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  • Vizard Dhawan (3/23/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    nice romantic saga..deeply written with full suppliment of romance..you have just do a full justice with ur poem..a splendid write, , , enjoyable

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  • Dave Walker (3/22/2013 5:36:00 PM)

    A great poem, a good write.

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