Hazel Durham

Without Compare - Poem by Hazel Durham

The start was slow and unpredictable,
You attracted me with your nature and handsome face,
So soft, like my own secret loft,
High emotions, tenderness, openness,
But your soul carries a heavy load,
Like a farm gate, that needs to be tightly closed,
You make me feel like a precious stone, luscious, flaming red,
With your supreme love in bed,
So macho, you always led,
Many facets of your character emerged with surprise,
Hand in hand through this tranquil land,
Fields wet dripping with past toil,
Mountains glazed with cotton wool mist,
You have me at the top of your wishing list,
Embracing with pasts,
Filled with sorrow and pain,
In a leafy lane,
The breeze softly caressing our fragile hearts,
Within our lair,
Your care,
Is without compare.

Comments about Without Compare by Hazel Durham

  • Gold Star - 6,662 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/21/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    Heartfelt and touching! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 50,721 Points Chinedu Dike (1/14/2015 4:17:00 AM)

    A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a fantastic poem. A superbly written piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (3/13/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    .....wonderful use of imagery...n metaphors....a great work as always hazel.... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,389 Points Adeline Foster (2/22/2014 12:43:00 PM)

    Nice love poem. Read mine - O Dearest Love -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (1/1/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    .. a brilliant romantic poem... every sentence is beautiful.. and love the title as well... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (11/14/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Keep writing my friend.poetry needs you more. without you poetry will loose her pacific balance. but dont forget to invite to make me deprive from making a dive in your swt emotion (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,072 Points Maya Hanson (4/7/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    So romantic- you have me at the top of your wishing list
    I wish I could write like this! ! ! Great job
    ~mye3 poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karen Degnan-foiles (3/30/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    Loved it! You really kept my attention... and what a beautiful story too.
    ~Karen (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (3/28/2013 2:30:00 PM)

    Romantic and heartfelt - another lovely poem Hazel. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (3/26/2013 9:40:00 PM)

    I agree with Lyda... care is to love as rays are to the sun.
    the sun may be 93 million miles away but the rays are felt here.
    Some that loves you may be six thousand miles away but the care can be felt
    anyway. Love your piem Hazel. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,328 Points Sayeed Abubakar (3/24/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    A very good poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,269 Points Vishal Sharma (3/23/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    nice romantic saga..deeply written with full suppliment of romance..you have just do a full justice with ur poem..a splendid write, , , enjoyable (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (3/22/2013 5:36:00 PM)

    A great poem, a good write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 22, 2013

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