Demarcus Walker

Rookie (7/29/92 / Texas)

Without You - Poem by Demarcus Walker

what is mickie without minnie
what is sponge bob without patrick
what is pooh without piglet...

What am i with out you
i'm nothing with out you boo
so let me tell you

you is the light in my darkness
you is the cloud in my sky
you is my everything
but i'm nothing with out you

Comments about Without You by Demarcus Walker

  • Rookie Guess who's back Angel Wade (6/10/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    This is so good and u have a great heart and u is very caring i see keep the good work up... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Cristy Upshaw (6/9/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    what a beautiful write to the one you love, how beautifully romantic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/9/2009 1:29:00 PM)

    good flow of words like this one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Dreamer (6/9/2009 12:09:00 PM)

    Good mix of words and rythm - well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*emo*princess *~ (6/5/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    i like it! it has a nice rythm thing goin on. keep writtin (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 1, 2009

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