Woman In My Dream Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Woman In My Dream

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My dream was to be a Jane Austen - or a Virginia Woolfe, whose 'stream of consciousness' touched the world,
or Kadambari - the muse who inspired the Bard in Bengali Literature.

a few fearless women -
Debjani, and Gandhari, and Draupadi, from Indian classics,
but before anyone else,
I want to be the woman who appears in my dream!

never went to school, she was not allowed,
picked up any paper when sweeping the floor,
and read - she was warned - women became widows if they read,
she was unstoppable!

she had ten kids - two still-births,
she cooked for thirty people every day, ate after she fed everyone,
she hand-knitted blankets, to keep children warm,
prayed every day for everyone she knew
and for the universe.

my grandmother, and so many women like her,
started a revolution, carried the torch,
Without realizing the legacy they left for us,
the burden they lifted for us!
did they see us - the women of today
in the horizon?

the modern, liberated, emancipated women,
we are today,
we go to school and choose our career,
we decide to marry or not, who to marry,
we raise our children with confidence,

we don't ask for money, we earn money,
we lead, we invent, we do miracles.

sorry Jane Austen, I would rather be my Grandma's granddaughter,
before anyone else!

Woman In My Dream
Monday, February 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: women empowerment,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is showing respect to the women who paved our way, empowered us with their dedication.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 08 August 2019

Those women of a former generation were wise beyond their years. A wonderful poem. Absolutely appropriate for this category.

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Thank you, Jane. I wrote this poem on International Women's Day.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2019

A nice tribute to a deserving grandmother, congrats!

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Thank you so much for reading the poem again! Your comments inspire me!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 August 2019

Such a significant and noble poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma’am Malabika on your chosen piece...10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2022

Happy women's day

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 09 August 2020

This is the second time this poem has been chosen as POD on August 8,2020. I am getting a lot of inspiring comments from other poets to my email address. Surprisingly and unfortunately, I don't see any of the comments on this page. Feeling really sad that I am not able to reply to those beautiful messages. I have informed PH administration, and they have assured me that the problem will be taken care of. Thanks to all members for their support.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 August 2020

Oh how beautifully presented the vitality of a woman, there is no doubt that a woman is stronger than anybody else if empowered and understood properly she can do miracles.......very touching as well as inspiring 10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 August 2020

A wonderful poem! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being featured as Poem of the Day!

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Ruta Mohapatra 08 August 2020

Quite true! What we are doing today was unthinkable a two generations back! Congrats on poem of day!

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