Worthwhile Wait ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Worthwhile Wait ~

Rating: 4.9


Why not become clouds and fall on
This barren land is waiting for you ~

Several seeds are lying in open heart
They are waiting for the water of love.

Before the light of the eyes fade away
Just for once you glitter and show your face.

All flowers are ready with fragrance to shower
This garden is waiting for your arrival.

Thursday, January 20, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 20 January 2022

A marvelous poem of love and hope! Let me quote-Several seeds are lying in open heart They are waiting for the water of love. Before the light of the eyes fade away Just for once you glitter and show your face

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Tihama Hykam 20 January 2022

Excellent, Several seeds are lying in open heart They are waiting for the water of love.

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Shreya Hacks 20 January 2022

Awesome poem on hope: All flowers are ready with fragrance to shower This garden is waiting for your arrival.

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Gordon Walter 28 January 2024

A hopeful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 January 2022

A very moving poem so well crafted and thought out. It propels one to make a difference. Wonderful imagery.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 January 2022

Wonderful poem Asim ji. Nature and flowers wait with open arms to be blessed by love. Worth waiting for this garden of love........10

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 January 2022

I agree with David Bravo!

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David Wood 20 January 2022

A brilliant love poem full of hope and expectations

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