Wren Songs Poem by Susy Evelyne

Wren Songs

Rating: 5.0


Taking the allotments path
One morning, I found myself
Caught up in melodies as
Two wrens, invisible, trilled
Far-carrying songs to each other.
Their notes travelling overhead,
Piercing spring air as clearly
As the rays of sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 October 2013

This is such a lovely poem! Beauty and brevity combining to make it look so special! 'Far-carrying songs to each other. Their notes travelling overhead, Piercing spring air as clearly As the rays of sun.' Only a poet's ears can hear these beautiful songs, her eyes see the imagery and the inner eyes draw it out for the readers to marvel at! 10/10.

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John Brown 23 October 2013

Beautiful little birds, with their up-tilted tails. I watch them often whilst working on my own allotment.

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