natalie vail


Write In Sand And Stone - Poem by natalie vail

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Today, my friend yelled at me.
I wrote in sand my friend yelled at me.
Today, my friend punched me.
I wrote in sand my friend punched me.
Today, my friend cursed me.
I wrote in sand my friend cursed me.
Today, my friend abandoned me.
I wrote in sand my friend abandoned me.
Today, my friend insulted me.
I wrote in sand my friend insulted me.

Today, my friend asked me for forgiveness.
I wrote in stone my friend asked for forgiveness.
Today, my friend saved my life.
I wrote in stone my friend saved my life.
Today, my friend made me smile.
I wrote in stone my friend made me smile.
Today, my friend told me she cares for me.
I wrote in stone my friend cares for me.
Today, my friend was grateful for me.
I wrote in stone my friend was grateful for me.

I wrote in sand the bad things my friend did to me.
I wrote in stone the nice things did to me.

Winds will erase the bad things written in sand.
Nothing can erase the nice things written in stone.
Forgive and Forget


Comments about Write In Sand And Stone by natalie vail

  • Rookie Violet Llewellyn (8/16/2007 7:24:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful, meaningful poem. Top marks.

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  • Rookie Amanda Eckert (7/13/2007 12:34:00 AM)

    This is a great poem......good job with it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie beautiful imperfection (7/2/2007 2:31:00 PM)

    wow...this is the perfect example of what a true friend should be. Great poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 15, 2011


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