Yes Or No Poem by David Threadgold

Yes Or No

Rating: 5.0


Picking petals one by one
Does he love or not?
A young girl seeks the answer
Under sun that beats down hot

A daisy from the meadow
Is slowly getting smaller
A young man who had caught her eye
Was handsome dark and taller

The final petal falls to ground
She says he loves me not
But she’ll keep plucking petals
Till the right one she has got


© 2008 David Threadgold
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 19 January 2009

This reminds me so much of a young girl that plucked off pedals of a daisy when she had a crush on a boy at school. That young girl was me, and this poem made it feel as though it were only yesterday. Thank you, my friend! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Roy Storey 17 October 2008

Its a bit like being a kid again buttercups and dasey chines, Thank you.

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

Ahh! Young love so very true spinning the dream to make it so.. Wonderful poem.. Such fun.

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