Yes Woman, May I Come Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Yes Woman, May I Come

Rating: 3.9


When you saved me,
you saved your self.

When you touched me,
you touched your self.

When you loved me, inside
you opened all your doors.

When you breath on me, in
passing, I shudder then rise.

You opened my eyes, to all
that is you, death is in a rose.

When you call me, fast I do run
lay at you feet, safe in your sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Wynn 09 June 2009

very nice piece, It is well written

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this is beautiful... sir........

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Catrina Heart 08 June 2009

The simpliest, most vivid yet heart warming poem i ever read in your page...Loved all the couplets verse.10+++

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Emily Beal 08 June 2009

like the poem............

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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