She Is Afraid, It Is Tired. Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

She Is Afraid, It Is Tired.

Rating: 3.1


Wherever you are..
It is..there..
and now you're afraid..
It is..tired...
His heart..
That you made.. with..
Hands passing of time..is..
The history both made..
and erased..
With your smile....
Nights love.....moon shines..
inside of the sun....
Face to face..
her shadow..
Lost..now and..forever..
He's left..without..love..
and one sun that smiled
God's love lass..and yes..
now he's tired...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

beautifullllllllllllllll poemmmmmmmmmmmmm

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. . 14 July 2009

Does he tire from her fear? Does she fear from his weary mind? Do they love sincere? Are they so inclined? So much beauty in you. :)

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

well said and written...great poem to ponder....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 October 2018

He's left..without..love.. and one sun that smiled God's love lass..and yes.. now he's tired... a poem of symbolism...... very fine and deep. tony

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Sofia Kioroglou 23 September 2015

Brilliant! Great write!

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lisa moore 10 August 2009

brilliant! ! ! thats the only word i can think of

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 July 2009

touching... and has a flow that softly caress the heart 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Marieta Maglas 20 July 2009

The poet emphasizes the essential ideas in depth background of this beautiful poem of symbolism.10+++

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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