Yesterdays Thoughts Poem by John A'Hern

Yesterdays Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


yesterday's cascade into todays
no turn off switch they tumble into place
the cause, a word, a scene no explanation given
avalanche covering, defences smashed down
there is no pause no turning back
they land unannounced with a smack
remember this remember that
slow down no chance to stop for a glance
speeding up scenes in a blur
who are you too late to answer?
come back and chat I need answers
giddiness takes over all a blur
steady as she goes where to from here
slowing down no time to frown
concentrate, take control be aware
another day another challenge
deep breaths taken, control needed
I awake as tired as when I fell asleep
Who is charge of all these thoughts?
Do I announce my presence to today?
Should I quietly slip away?

Sunday, August 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: imaginings ,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 04 August 2019

This insightful poem shows us the cascade of thoughts that never slow down. Brilliantly executed, dear John.

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John Ahern 05 August 2019

Thank you for your kind comments, Jane Campion. Long live comments, without them we will never understand what other poets think of our poems.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 August 2019

The uninterrupted train of thoughts crossing over from yesterday to today in one's mind creates a lot of confusions and restlessness. A wonderful and innovative theme s also the poetic expression.a Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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John Ahern 05 August 2019

A thank you for your comment, Ratnakar Mandlik.

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