You Poem by Amanda Stuchly

You



The kindness of your hand's
The gentleness of your kiss.
The warmth of your body against mine

The love you give
... the time we share
The talk's of the future

The world against us
The word's unspoken at the moment
...
Your the angel of my dark side
The one that everyone talk's about
The thing's we do for each other
World come's in hard time's as thing's get easy for us

You hand within mine
You touch feeling like heaven
The wonder's of the mystery you give

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about my boyfriend.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 04 May 2012

The poem gives a heavenly touch to the readers. Some apostrophe marks(hand's, talk's, thing's, wonder's) are not necessary. Your poetic nature sparkles in some phrases as warmth of the body, gentle kiss, touch of heaven, kindness of hand etc. A very nice maiden poem. Best Wishes!

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