You Poem by Ben Smith

You

Rating: 4.0


In my head
Can't stop remembering
Your face, your
Hair, your touch
Loving your smile
Loving you always

Can't say good
Bye, but I
Must put away
This industrial lust

Your boyfriend, my
best friend, no
Mistakes
Regrets

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samantha Gibson 21 March 2008

beautifully sad. reminds me of my experiences with love

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Vindy Wasana 29 February 2008

Deep idea expressed in simple way. well done.`

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Ameera Aidrus 29 February 2008

Gud write....u seem to b a romatic fool! lolz

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 09 September 2007

i really liked the flow of this. good topic too.

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Evaughn Gray 31 August 2007

nice poem..really liked it..~hazel

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Ben Smith

Ben Smith

Traverse City, Michigan
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