You And I Poem by indira babbellapati

You And I

Rating: 2.8


you and i
mere illusions
created through
this body to test our
strength and resolve to
loosen this grip on the earth

you and i
mere shadows
of a great light playing
an eternal hide and seek

22dec2009
11.42hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 January 2010

Hmm…concept of Capital ‘Y’ of You [Thou] and small ‘i’ …of me 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Anju Addanki 24 December 2009

Thats a good one. small and cute one

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ah.. illusions eh.. we are indeed small.. in comparison to all. i like the poem

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Ranjit Ravindran 22 December 2009

An illusion that sustains mankind!

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 22 December 2009

A beautiful philosophic poem. Truth carved through verse pleasantly. The 'you' and 'i' though are mortals and shadows are instruments of the Light for its absorption, scattering and spread. I liked the idea of the poem so much.

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visakhapatnam, india
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