**you And Your Friends** Poem by Marton Dezso

**you And Your Friends**

Rating: 2.6


No demon of yours will do you the favour
To disappear and vanish after you left him behind.
It's simply not the demons' nature
You'd better keep it in mind
When you think you had won,
Defeated an unclean one
With some of your silly thoughts and emotions,
Your cheap plastic swords.. Better think twice:

Just hardly visible motions
On the water
Just hardly hearable screams
In the night.

But at least you have something in common
- You and your friends - something to cherish.
Having no purpose here, even the gods
Die and perish.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 06 October 2009

'But at least you have something in common - You and your friends - something to cherish. Having no purpose here, even the gods Die and perish. ''................the poem has something to tell...to be exact, this brings heavy emotion...sweetheart, everything will end anytime...it just differ on the time...ur piece exresses clear and loud...acknowledged....hope u and ur friends are just fine...cheers...

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Afzal Shauq 01 October 2009

Just hardly visible motions On the water Just hardly hearable screams In the night. wow a good and impressive poem with rich and interesing idea and meaningful is enough..liked it.. and you are a good poet..read your few more poems and liked

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