I will take you to the dephts of the ocean
among deaf and blind creatures of the deep
we find our salty salvation
at the bottom of the sea
not the fire and its flames
but the ocean and its waves
will purify us
not the fire and its flames but the ocean and its waves will purify us really a deep poem and can be felt deep inside heart..lovely short and impressive one..well done..really appreciate your meaningful way of writing
worth to try your *Purgatorius Ignis*: not the fire and its flames but the ocean and its waves.... Worth reading as many of yours before this one.
A peaceful and compassionate alternative to the more conventional notion of purging by fire. How inspiring are the elements to stir the poetic heart. This is an unusual and insightful poem. Worth a second read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This has great imagery Marton and a wonderful message as well. I get vivid pictures of the ocean and am not interested in the fire and flames, so this poem works very well indeed. 10 love Karin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Who else is here because of Arlecchino's constellation name?