(response to a poem 'You Are My Life...' by Saadat Tahir)
You are the air
I need to breath
You are the light
I need to see
You are the water
to cleanse my soul
You are my dream
of fields of gold
You are my fire
You are my life
And I-Saadat
Am but your wife!
But I am yours!
I am the half
of your whole
P.S.
Like you Saadat
I play with words
But I know someday
You’ll find Her
© 2009 Sonya Florentino
'You are my dream of fields of gold'. What a lovely thought. Wonderful that poets can inspire each other. 10, for you. Love, SandraX
that e-hug felt good...you're very welcome...it's no masterpiece but I think it's cute... thanks for inspiring it! e-hug back... :)
LOLxx so sweet of u to write a poem...inspired by my poem....wow.... afirst for me i am honoured and thanx u for the time and effort obviously its a masterpiece... ;) and here ten and it goes to my favs and and a and...ofcourse...an e-hug thanx....charming lady... i deeeply apppreciate cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are the water to cleanse my soul You are my dream of fields of gold I simply loved the lines!