You Are Poem by lucy sunga

You Are

Rating: 5.0


you are the love of my life
you are the hope that i cling to
you mean more than this world to me

i wouldnt trade you for silver or god
i would'nt trade you for richest untold
you are, you are my everything

i couldnt take one step without you
i could never go on
i couldnt breathe one breathe without you
i dont have the strength to make it on my own..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 31 January 2010

A love so deep from the deepest depth of a heart....nice

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John Knight 08 January 2010

Hi Lucy - Welcome to the PH Family - we are all your friends and look forward to more poems from you. This is a Lovely Love Poem and I score it a TEN (I don't think my vote is registering. V 1 We all need A LOVE in our lives to help us through. V 2 Such A LOVE is indeed worth far far more than silver or gold - they are priceless. V 3 From expereince I agree with you such A LOVE guides our steps - gives us life (breath) - and strength. LUCY your are fortunate to have such a love in your life. Please read some of my poems. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

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