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Fidelis Patronus


You are Beautiful


You are beautiful
Your love shines right through me
Every time I hear your name
It makes my cheeks red with shame

You are beautiful
And I love you
Like I love music
But you much more boldly

How about you and I go down to the park?
It makes this love more mysterious and dark

You are beautiful
Your red lips make my cheeks red
Your flowing hair makes mine stand on end
Jealousy, envy, love, and lust
You cannot be more robust

You are beautiful
Now I have described it as best I can

I should be done talking to myself now
And I think I should talk to the beautiful stranger before me
Or maybe the beautiful you is not man but is this-
Poetry

Yes I believe I will go down to the park
So it is mysterious and dark
And write about you Poetry
For I realize that Poetry is far more beautiful than thee

Submitted: Tuesday, November 30, 2004

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  • Fidelis Patronus (10/23/2006 1:02:00 PM)

    I'm back! ! ! My name was hellp because my mother found my poems and back tehn i had poems that were alot more intense. about suicide, religion, and sex. My mom banned me from the site and made me delet all my poems. (my mom and family r VERY strong christians) i changed my name and deleted only some of my poems. My name was hellp cuz i felt like i was in hell and i REALLY needed help. i was so scared. I'v never been on the website for years and then i got an email today that sed i hada comment on one of my poems...i read all of the commments i missed and it totally inspired me to continue my poetry. I changed my name and i will try 2 pick up where i left off...i havn't written poetry since i got caught...thankyou so much for ur support (Report) Reply

  • Fidelis Patronus (12/9/2004 2:11:00 PM)

    I just thought this poem would be a bit funny becuz i was makin fun of how poets always talk to htemselves about how beautiful somebody or somethin is... (Report) Reply

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