hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,856 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

You Go Alone - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

You go for self and wait for none
Fight it out all but one
You may loose path but never be afraid
River may change path and course not straight

Consider it struggle and not path simple,
Task you may have but not opportunity ample,
Life may be game even worst than the gamble,
It may be acid test ………….

Make earnest effort and try very hard,
Life may even last as you grow old,
Youngsters may cut joke and laugh also elder,
Task may get tough as you spread wider,

It may be harder than even Herculean,
You may bogged down and not come clean,
Dark clouds may appear making more thunder,
You may loose heart and fear more plunder

Goal may be off and you may still wonder,
What will be in store? Question you may ponder?
It may hurt you more as ground seems look,
Not to loose composure but come out of hook

In peace you strive more for good result,
Chances may look deem facing more insult,
You may feel shame and not even consult,
It will give pain such as somersault,

If you sweat more less you may bleed
Stormy weather may pass without any read
Time is precious luck you may need,
Best efforts to be put while sowing seed,

You are always master but not go for rest,
Give hope a chance and try for best,
You may not fail but pass the entire test,

Strange are the ways but not last more,
You may have you faced task this before,
Never to contend with less but try more and more
Put your best efforts with new areas explore




Why to go alone and not efforts combine?
Success may come but not result fine,
No sincere effort but only little cry
Empire may be lost with half hearted try

You will need full attempt while acting tough,
Fall you may have on surface rough
Aim always high and inch still forward,
Face all odds and never fall backward,

Put brave front and not withdraw as coward
Success may touch your feet as full reward
Life is worth to live and is biggest award
Try for best and always look forward

You may heave sigh and feel also relief,
It may augur well and strengthen your belief,
Beginning will be little hard as fresh leaf,
Success story may speak and heard by deaf


Comments about You Go Alone by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie - 88 Points Jonathan Maldonado (3/25/2012 7:34:00 PM)

    This piece is great, inspirational even. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lousia Dai (8/2/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    O, you wrote so long to test my patience. Verse is terse.
    see how terse my verse is.
    Tks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie NoName DeletedAccount (6/1/2010 10:07:00 PM)

    I like that you write alot and enjoyed reading this. It's very discriptive and I'm learing to write more reading this. (: 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Shipka (2/7/2010 5:07:00 PM)

    I like this poem...the most captured I´m :
    'Make earnest effort and try very hard,
    Life may even last as you grow old,
    Youngsters may cut joke and laugh also elder,
    Task may get tough as you spread wider, ' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vijay Suwarnkar (10/9/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    You go for self and wait for none
    Fight it out all but one
    You may loose path but never be afraid
    River may change path and course not straight (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Twinkle Vohra (10/3/2009 7:50:00 PM)

    Make earnest effort and try still harder,
    Life may even last as you grow older,
    Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwina K (10/3/2009 12:32:00 PM)

    Make earnest effort and try still harder,
    Life may even last as you grow older,
    Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sadia Hussain (10/3/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    You go alone and find no one,
    Fight you it out, but all alone,
    You may loose path but not you deter,
    River may change path or course even (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ramdulari Sinha (10/3/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    You go alone and find no one,
    Fight you it out, but all alone, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sita Kesri (10/2/2009 11:49:00 PM)

    You go alone and find no one,
    Fight you it out, but all alone,
    You may loose path but not you deter,
    River may change path or course even alter, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venkat Ramanna (10/1/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    You go alone and find no one,
    Fight you it out, but all alone,
    You may loose path but not you deter,
    River may change path or course even alter, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K.v. Subbarao (10/1/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    Consider it a struggle but not path simple,
    Task you may have but not time ample,
    Life may be harsh even worst than the gamble,
    It may just be test and not like sample, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saroj Davde (9/29/2009 10:59:00 PM)

    You go alone and find no one,
    Fight you it out, but all alone,
    You may loose path but not you deter,
    River may change path or course even alter (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Punjabi (9/29/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Make earnest effort and try still harder,
    Life may even last as you grow older,
    Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kashi Paul (9/29/2009 9:26:00 AM)

    You may loose path but not you deter,
    River may change path or course even alter, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Umesh Lalvani (9/29/2009 7:30:00 AM)

    Consider it a struggle but not path simple,
    Task you may have but not time ample, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pami Panchal (9/29/2009 6:41:00 AM)

    You go alone and find no one,
    Fight you it out, but all alone,
    You may loose path but not you deter, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shilpa Maheswari (9/28/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    Consider it a struggle but not path simple,
    Task you may have but not time ample,
    Life may be harsh even worst than the gamble (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Suresh Vakil (9/28/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    Make earnest effort and try still harder,
    Life may even last as you grow older,
    Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rupa Shah (9/28/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    Things may prove hard like task Herculean,
    You may get bogged down and not come clean, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 8, 2009


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