Hi, I searched you...
Hi, I searched you
in the narrow lane
Even in the crowded bus
or, may be in the train.
I searched you
in a pitter patter day
Or, in the autumn cloud
in the long hay.
Hi, I got you...
Hi, I got you
in the dark cloud
In the spark of lightning
in the aphotic woods.
You were in me.
As my deep emotion
Hi, you are HE
My ultimate SALVATION.
amazing write! ! a search for the one who is residing in self.. :)
a lovely presentation of all encompassing divinity. transcends narrower meanings well written liked
At first when I began reading this, I thought this was going to be hokey love story about some romantic paramour, but as I continued reading it I found it had something more deeper and richer, the search for the divine is the greatest pursuit anyone can attain, I like how your search essentially finds the essence of the spirit of a divine being to exist in all things, even within us, your ending is perfect for summarizing the journey we must all take. Awesome work
Interesting how we never have to really look any further than within ourselves.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I repeat God is every where and some say He is the only real existence. Nice poem.