, You Loved Me Poem by Louise Tredoux

, You Loved Me

Rating: 3.0


I was delighted when I found you
where you were hiding, jumping
on crutches I couldn’t chase you,
searching the flat, in a flash of
pure inspiration

Looked through the flap we had
installed for the cat, and there you
were, eyes twinkling and laughing
like mad, and the feeling opened
like a flower within me

The realization flowed through my
being like the sweetest honey and
made me glow – you loved me,
and I loved you so!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 30 May 2009

passionate wordplay..lovely indeed...10

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Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2009

Words have a playful tone

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