You Messed Up My Life Poem by James Hernandez

You Messed Up My Life



you messed up my life,
i wanted you to be my future wife.
i wanted to be you knight.
i wanted to take you in the night and day.
so we can go to the bay and watch the waves sway in its own way.
i wanted to wake up everyday to see your pretty face.
i wanted to protect you in all the ways i can.
but it is to late i have already went my way.
now i want to cry because you messed up my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth T. 09 October 2008

Wow very expressing! Great sentence fluency- great writing. Hang in there, for life will turn around for you

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I Love You Truly 09 October 2008

love, sometimes dying is good, cause than we wake up again, and move on.. but with more knowledge than when we begun... so stay strong, and know that the sun shines on.. thank you for sharing!

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