James Hernandez


You Messed Up My Life - Poem by James Hernandez

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you messed up my life,
i wanted you to be my future wife.
i wanted to be you knight.
i wanted to take you in the night and day.
so we can go to the bay and watch the waves sway in its own way.
i wanted to wake up everyday to see your pretty face.
i wanted to protect you in all the ways i can.
but it is to late i have already went my way.
now i want to cry because you messed up my life.


Comments about You Messed Up My Life by James Hernandez

  • Rookie Elizabeth T. (10/9/2008 2:01:00 PM)

    Wow very expressing! Great sentence fluency- great writing.

    Hang in there, for life will turn around for you (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie I Love You Truly (10/9/2008 2:00:00 PM)

    love, sometimes dying is good, cause than we wake up again, and move on.. but with more knowledge than when we begun... so stay strong, and know that the sun shines on.. thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 21, 2008


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