You old man
Monday,26th August 2019
"You old man" get lost
no place for you here at any cost
I was virtually on the road
homeless shaken bodily on the road
why children become intolerant?
and unwelcome parents
show them the door
and make them virtually destitute and poor
I have no regret
but let
my feeling be put in the air
to look reasonable and fair
who will not leave behind?
enough to live on and find
comfortable means to carry on
with the rest of life to put on
the wind is really blown
in the opposite direction
with the living hell
bear it in mind and not to reveal to anyone
this is a stark reality
and looks dirty
but it happens with old people
who really feel grieved and struggle
Hasmukh Mehta
U have thrown out a gentleman Robert M Smith...putting much energy to play with youngsters..u will be responsible for your own sorrows with series of severe unimaginable blows! ! ! !
U will get things that u have not received in your life time.. please be careful! U have taught us what to do! !
Empathize with your feelings. Really, children should realize that they themselves will one day become old. Thanks for the poignant read. Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Aug 26,2019
A very touching post that reflects the reality of the day... Rajeev Moothedath, Bangalore, Aug 27,2019
Wendy Phelan Fantastic! I felt the sadness and power of these lines, Hasmukh. Wonderful writing. I trust you are sharing your poetry with poetry pages? If not, I encourage you to do so. 1 Hide or report this Like · Reply · 4d Like · Reply · 4d
Hasmukh Mehta ya tks for the encouragement. I share it with maximum groups 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 4d
sarla balachandran 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 1m
True! This generation gap and feelings of youth for their parents are always same. The elderly hope, wait and put their fingers crossed for their kindness and love. How long this hope and trust will make the old tolerate? Nice concept and you've put forth all your ideas well, Sir! Padma, Khammam, Aug 26,2019 R
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Why did you drive out Robert M Smith by defaming him in a heinous manner? You are the man to do so...the great conspirator! ! !