sharon simani


You Or Me? - Poem by sharon simani

Funny, isn’t it?
You are the broken one…….
Why am I the one in needs to be saved?
Now we run around after our tails
Caught up in this web of confusion.

This dark force is driving out the light
Too strong, too overwhelming……
We are not going back but I don’t see us moving forward
Stagnant like a mosquito infested paddle

Our noses wrinkled by the stench of our own feuds,
Glaring angry stares exchanged willy nilly.
Funny, isn’t it?
I love you, you hate me,
I am your girlfriend but you are not my boyfriend.
But when you never see the light it’s hard…..
Hard to know which one of us is fading.


Comments about You Or Me? by sharon simani

  • Gold Star - 18,958 Points Rajnish Manga (8/28/2015 4:05:00 AM)

    The reader is overtaken by the untouched metaphors and the freshness of the language of the poem:
    Our noses wrinkled by the stench of our own feuds,
    Glaring angry stares exchanged willy nilly. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,624 Points David Wood (4/15/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    A lovely but sad poem and a good write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,238 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/15/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    Hard to know which one is fading. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, April 15, 2013


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