Dear visitors in the dark way
I know you search light sure
A little ray too values more
For all of us in deep darkness.
You see this little candle
Or you see that little lamp
Which is visible in far cottage
An old man has lit you all see.
Very narrow is dangerous way
Daily you walk in dense forest
Light is of course needed for
We can not sustain without it.
May be very wealthy this darkness
Many may say this black diamond
Still you know there is obstacle
But very small light cracks this.
You see this little light near
To learn secret wisdom you feel
Be ready ever to light life soon
We have to go by this way to him.
Little light ray helps in wining broader darkness. The poem has true learning principles.
A poem which brings hope and light upon the life's paths of darkness. The metaphor of light as spiritual enlightenment is most beautiful.
picture of Ramin Ara xSuperb and a nice work dear Kumarmani. Thank you for sharing your poems with us. 5 Dec 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xYes! For All of Us in deep darkness, we NEED this little light, and we can feel soon how this little light works in us all. Amen, and thank you so much for sharing this little gem, a very precious thoughtful poetry. 5 Dec 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Elizabeth Squires xA fine poem my friend. Thanks for sharing. 6 Dec 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Jarid... xVery great piece. Enjoyed reading this. Tfs. 7 Dec 2015 by Jarid... | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xPowerful poetry. Very uplifting. 10 Dec 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Lynda Robson xGreat writing, enjoyable read, thanks 11 Dec 2015 by Lynda Robson | Reply
A beautiful work. We use our eyes to look for daily light while we use our heart to seek the light of divine within.
The poem emitting wisdom related with philosophy of life and human's striving for confluence with the Creator (Param Atman) is nicely penned. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Secret wisdom is with the muse of light! Nice work.