Death came to you without warning
you closed your eyes your weekened heart ceased to beat
You couldn't stay you went away without saying goodbye
I didn't cry not then i just wondered why
I held your hand and it was as cold as ice
I couldn't understand why you went the way you did
How could you leave me like that you were never meant to go
At least, not then you were far too young
You should have stayed it wasn't fair i needed you to be there
But, you went away and until this day i miss you still
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yep, there's a ton of feeling in this poem, Jenni. I think you could strengthen the feeling by using more figurative expressions. Best wishes, Gina.