Your Dumped Poem by cara shaw

Your Dumped



Death stroke down
My rocky spine
I' ve been stabbed
blood trickled out of my body

my body empty's
out all glory
pain and sorrow
takes its place

my blood is
so red that
you can see
your reflection

my feelings for you
quiver away
a dim light
shines on me

when we met
you stole my heart
i thought you were
the one for me

you brought back
my heart
and stole all
my happiness

you highlighted my
life with your smile
than made it grey
by saying two words

these two words
destroyed my body
you turned to me
and said 'you'r dumped'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is about me and how i felt when i got dumped its good but i express myself on this poem hoope u like it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zubiya Surti 15 June 2012

Its a very nice poem.that is how exactly how you feel when you are dumped.isn't it?

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