Your Sacrifice Poem by Jackie Oakden

Your Sacrifice



I know what you are thinking
you're thinking ' why does this world need me? '
don't let your heart keep sinking
I know someday you will be free

have you ever been to a place with no pain at all
a place where you can never fall
its where you don't have to get down and crawl
onto the ground and be his booty call

(chorus)
I know that you don't like to suffer
and neither do I
but I love you too much to know
please don't cry
you don't have to go oh
I'll let him take my life not yours
not yours but my life
I'll be your sacrifice
(end chorus)

this place where you have never been to
has deep clouds if you were falling they'd catch you
if they didn't catch you what would you do?
who or what would be there to catch you?
(repeat chorus 2 times)


[this is actually a song I wrote. I wrote this one 3/21/09. Hope you like it]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

oooo i like it alot! i love song writing and singing. i always write songs. a few of my poems are songs but changed a bit to make them into a poem... awesome x

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Jackie Oakden

Jackie Oakden

Palm Springs, California
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