Zodiac In Retrospect Poem by Grace Diane Jessen

Zodiac In Retrospect



When ancient Greeks devised a map of sky
and chose twelve constellations for their chart
that followed the ecliptic, did they lie
at night on mats, look up, agree to start
by giving each a name, a shape, a sign?
What foolishness to think it matters now
what they imagined then. No mystic line
ties me to superstition's heavy plow.
I once regretted being born a crab,
the Cancer title made me feel unwell.
I thought a Leo's life would not be drab
or Scorpio, a fairer fate compel.
But earth has turned, the equinox is past.
My course is mine to choose, the die not cast.

Thursday, June 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy ,fate
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem won first place in a Utah State Poetry Society contest in 2013. It was published in Panorama, volume 32.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 16 June 2017

What a wonderful sonnet about astrology! I've always thought people who lived their lives by astrology were idiots.

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Grace Jessen 04 August 2017

Thanks for your comments, Spock!

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Kim Barney 15 June 2017

Reading this poem again, I am just blown away! So much truth in so few words! How foolish people are who think that the stars guide their paths in life! We all live by our own choices, not fate or predestination.

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Kim Barney 15 June 2017

A wonderful sonnet, professionally done and much too good to be posting here on Poem Hunter. You should have saved it for the next contest. When I first saw the title. I thought maybe you were writing about the Zodiac killer who terrified California back in the late sixties and early seventies, and who was never caught. My brother lived in California at the time and had a friend who was on the California Highway Patrol. One of the main suspects was known to both of them, and they always tried to get a fingerprint sample from him, but the man always wore gloves. One day, they finally came up with some ruse that worked, and got the guy to take off his gloves to handle a glass. However, when they sent the glass to the lab, there wasn't a single fingerprint on it!

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Grace Jessen 30 July 2017

How fascinating! That should be a good topic for a poem. One of you should write it.

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