All Rise Poem by M. Asim Nehal

All Rise

Rating: 5.0


As the occasion demands
All of us to rise an inch
Above our capability
To meet the challenges
In this technological world
Throws at us, time and again
We are mortals hence
We should not fear the death
For it is just the change
Inevitable, undeniable
Till the time we leave
On this beautiful earth
Let us enjoy the good
And forbid the bad
Live in peace and harmony
Shower love and affection
Lend a helping hand
Treat others respectfully and
Depart this world gracefully

Friday, July 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 06 July 2016

Inspiring and motivating, just to sum up in two words.

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Daniel Brick 04 July 2016

I agree with Nosheen's comment about the flowing, gradually unfolding truth of your poem. It is persuasive in a quiet way, it shows that the ancient wisdom about living a good life is still the most reliable guide in thriving body and soul. This poem is a lullaby for adults. It quiets the inner turmoil and prepares the reader for life's next challenge.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 July 2016

Very inspirational work. I endorse every verse of this poem. The smooth flow of thoughts n words make it a very pleasing read. Thanku for this great message.10 definitely.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2016

Time throws us again again in this technological world to meet challenges. Treating others respectfully with love and caring matters a lot. Interesting sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2016

Peace and love! To treat others respectfully. Nice work.

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